Always end up running in circles
With bruises of bright greens and purples
Sooner or later must put up a fight
unchain and let it take flight
these are my thoughts, superfluous bubbles
With bruises of bright greens and purples
Sooner or later must put up a fight
unchain and let it take flight
these are my thoughts, superfluous bubbles
5 comments:
Flimsy, they are not. Not the thoughts, at least.
I wish some of my thoughts were like bubbles, then I could simply burst them :))
Nice limerick.
Right time to set them free..ur thoughts.
Hey I have never understood the funda of these limericks. Why to rhyme the fifth with the first two? By the time you reach the fifth line you forget the rhymes of the first two!!!
nn,fanaah any thoughts?
Aran: :)
Fanaah: Then what are they like?
Pranay: Hmm..that's an idea.
666: I think thats the whole point of Limerticks ...to be whimsical. the method is for the madness.
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