I’m a drop of coffee fallen from the mug of abundance, with the alacrity and resolve of an arrow left a bow, on to a piece of paper, plopped patiently, breaking down resistance, seeping into each fibre slowly, persistently, permeating in every direction palpable, strained pale until every grain of the paper is imbibed in my essence eternally, submissive and changed.
5 comments:
The fibre would still stay fibre .. and the drop would still be a drop.
And yet not in their original form.
5 commas, 66 words, 1 full-stop and alliterative overexposure (piece,paper,plopped,patiently,persistently,permeating,palpable and a spill over on to the next post pencils!)
@ Nega
I love the detail you went into. Youre awesome at it!
@666
Amazing observation powers!Phew
@666: 'leasantly 'erceptive
@Fanaah: :), thank you.
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